CREATIVE WRITING IMPROVEMT

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1.      Children’s story using the words ‘sea’ ‘night’ ‘train’ ‘stars’ ‘danger’.                                                                                                                                                     Alize was a 12 year old girl who lived in Islamabad, Pakistan. She saw few riots and fight at a very young age in life and her parents one day decided to not to keep their daughter in this kind of an environment. They did not wanted their daughter to have a bad childhood memory of the place she was born in. They decided to shift to India and thought of starting a new life. They booked three train tickets and left. It was mid night and the train stopped at a very dark place near a sea, Alize’s parents were in deep sleep and they warned her not to step down the train at night because it is very dangerous and someone could kidnap her. Alize was looking at the sky filled with stars absolutely beautiful. Alize wanted to go out and see the reflection of the stars on the sea. She recalled that her parents gave her a warning but she could not stop herself. She stepped down the train very silently and stood near the sea, few minutes passed that way and suddenly she heard the sound of the trains honking and the train started moving slowly. Alize was a little far from the train, she got really worried and ran as fast as she could. She started shouting ‘abba’ ‘abba’ which woke her father up from the sleep. Her dad rushed to the train door, he saw Alize running and as soon as she came near the door, her dad pulled her in and hugged her. She learned the lesson of always listening to her parents and slept peacefully with the image of the reflection of starts on the sea.



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